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All Deviations
All Deviations




I dream a dream of summer,
How it turns to bitter cold snow
And when winter falls, I draw up
Inside of myself for warmth. Purely
By accident, I forget you in my
Struggle for survival. I wake to
Find the bed half empty,
I stir slowly to an incomplete
Breakfast. My heart was torn
Asunder by myself. I need you,
I miss you, and while your gone,
I shrivel up and die. The suicide
Note, scrawled on the walls in my
Own black blood, hastily adds my
Deepest regrets. But when you look
Into my eyes, your spark re-ignites
My pupils, and your kiss breathes life
Into my veins. But my broken body
Draws too deeply from your pool of
Heavenly elixir, and searching,
You taste a Romeos’ poison on a
Lovers’ lips,
And find my otherworldly courier,
Standing proud in my heart, just
Nine millimeters tall. A miniature
Church spire, to send me to my
Unspoken god.
©2004-2008 =AblativeLove
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Submitted: October 23, 2004
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i wrote this a while ago.
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~KuroNoHime:iconKuroNoHime: Dec 16, 2004, 6:00:13 AM
*silence*
I loved the phrases "black blood" and "You taste a Romeos’ poison on a
Lovers’ lips" ...
In the darkness it's hard to tell if something is beautiful, but I think that this one has the inner shine.

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I'm the darker side of the darkness
=AblativeLove:iconAblativeLove: Dec 16, 2004, 2:50:21 PM
i tried to recreate what i see everyday in one of my best friends. she shines so brightly, i can always see through the darkness when she is around.
~Geladrial:iconGeladrial: Jan 25, 2005, 11:32:32 AM
What a beautiful piece of poetry, why aren't you doing creative writing for gen ed!? *screams* rar, i can't believe how beautiful this pice of, omg, fantastic.

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"I've been living in your tears"

"I'm not going to beg you to love me... instead I'll just force you"

"Don't break my heart into pieces... break it into shards"
=AblativeLove:iconAblativeLove: Jan 25, 2005, 11:51:12 AM
hey! because i don't need to go to gen ed to write creatively.
*DysfunctionalChild:iconDysfunctionalChild: Apr 23, 2005, 12:07:20 PM
oh wow. this is beautiful greg *hugs* *snuggles*

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~I want to walk in the snow and not leave a footprint~
=AblativeLove:iconAblativeLove: Apr 23, 2005, 12:12:51 PM
:)

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-You have cancer.
-That's not very funny Doctor House.
-It's growing on your humerus - I'd say that makes it down-right hilarious.
clicky
*zentju:iconzentju: Aug 30, 2007, 2:48:04 PM
poke... heart touching nice work

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The light point of my life is my backpack...
it weight less.